Daag Dehlvi

My introduction to Daag Dehlvi was through Vikram Seth's A Suitable Boy, in which 'Daag' is the affectionate nickname of one of the more likable characters. The book is peppered with translations of Daag's shers and ghazals. After I read the book I was on the look-out for ghazal albums featuring Daag's work. I was quite excited when I found one Ghazal by Daag in Abida Parveen's Ghazal ka Safar album:


Le chala jaan meri rooth ke jaana tera
Aise jaane se to beheter tha na aana tera

Tu khuda to nahi ae naaseh-naadan mera, (naaseh: adviser)
Kya khata kii jo kaha maine na maana tera

'Daag' ko yuun vo mitate hain, yeh farmaate hain,
Tu badal daal hua naam puraana tera.




Don't leave me quite like this sweetheart,
Do you want me to wish that you had rather not come?

You are not God, O naive adviser of mine,
But my mistake. When you spoke I should have listened.

She wipes 'Daag' away like she would wipe away a stain,
'Change your name' She says, 'I will soon be bored with you'



Daag's USP seems to be his simplicity. Not much wit, no mystique, no bitterness, no complaint, no cleverness, no irony, no sarcasm. Just simplicity. Daag's ghazals ooze a placid contentment - the kind you would feel if you lay with your face to the sun on a mild winter morning (Or, like I used to in college, in the only-way-out incandescent warmth of a 100 watt bulb on a chill rainy night).

Ghalib's shers might make you sit up and listen to each word and in the end rush a sharp thrill run up your spine or bring goose-bumps to your forearms; Daag's shers will make you sway your head to the gentle melody and in the end might make you nod your head in approval or bring a smile to your lips.

Here's another super amazing Ghazal I found in an album by Iqbal Bano (If you find two ghazals too much to take in one day, read this tomorrow, but do read it.):


Na ravaa kahiye na sazaa kahiye
kahiye kahiye mujhe bura kahiye

(Can't figure out meaning of the first line though the intent of the sher seems clear)

Vo mujhe katl kar ke kahate hain
Maanata hi na thaa ye kya kahiye


She sighs after she has done killing me,
"Bugger never listened, what can I do!"


Aagayi aap ko masihaa-ii,
Marne waalon ko marhaba kahiye ("Marhaba!" = "Well done!")

Hosh udane lage rakibon ke (rakib = rival)
'Daag' ko aur bewafa kahiye

Remake-Vemake

Its difficult to make a remake and make it appeal to people who have seen the original. I liked the Shahrukh Khan 'Devdas' perhaps because I had not seen the Saigal one or the Dilip Kumar one. Though I liked 'Sarkar' I found it quite insubstantial compared to the original 'Godfather'.

I read in the paper that J.P.Datta is remaking Umrao Jaan. With Aishwarya Rai in the title role and Anu Mallick giving the music. And Abhishek Bacchan is going to play Farooq Sheikh's role. Bad casting and bad music plus a director not world-famous for subtlety. Bana chuke yeh mahashay Umrao Jaan. If you recall the picturisation of the song "Zindagi jab bhi teri bazm mein laati hai hame" - Farooq Sheikh and Rekha in some misty, earthy environs and the understated, melodious voice of Talat Aziz - you will know what I am talking about.

Gair len mehfil mein bosey jaam ke,
ham rahen yuun tashnaalab paigaam ke


(bosey=kisses, tashnaalab=thirsty)
My rivals kiss the wineglass in your mehfil,
While here I thirst for mere word from you


khat likhenge garche matalab kuch na ho,
ham to aashiq hain tumhare naam ke


(garche=if, even if)
I will write to you even if I have nothing to say,
I just love to write your name


Ishq ne 'Ghalib' nikamma kar diya
varna ham bhi aadmi the kaam ke


Love has ruined you O Ghalib,
Otherwise even you might have become something

I am writing a lot these days. But none of it can appear on my blog. Not yet, atleast. Because it is all technical stuff and it is all going into a paper I am writing for TI-India's internal technical conference. Like all 'defined-output' writing projects I take up I did not at all enjoy writing the paper. Writing was laborious, a chore, a burden. But now that I have almost finished it feels like it was worth it. I am enjoying the writing in retrospect. Besides, all the writing was done using LATEX - that precision document creator which can even make junk look like Godspeak - with figures and diagrams which look as if they are only there for aesthetic value.

I hope someday ieee will agree to accept a paper from me and then I will be able to scan it and put it on my blog.